All Comments on 'A Night to Remember Ch. 01'

by diablofan12345

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
Great Idea

Very good Diablo, Only Please dont have the Mum turn into a slut now that her Son has found that out. Dont introduce more people especialy guys into the story. It will cheapen her. There's enough of that on this site already. Have a loving relationship develop where she might impart some education or something to make him a better lover.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Pretty good

I liked the setup, it was quick and to the point. Don't worry about what people tell you to write. You write the story you want, if they want something else, they should write stories themselves.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very good.

I love reading this story, it is very very good. I hope that you will write the next chapter to this story soon.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
A little short but a good story

So his mom was a porn queen? I think I'm going to like this story line,maybe she can teach the little bugger how to eat pussy. Thanks

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