by ronde
Holy cow nobody's commented on this story publibly I wonder why not I know for a fact its the best story I have read under romance so far and I have read quite a few. Anyway loved the story and that's all I have to say.
Absolutely terrific, almost the story of my life, until the end anyway. WOuld have been 100% if the "f" word had been left out. Took a little away from the romance. But all in all wonderful story.
and so believable having met my current partner in a chat room seven years ago then met up with her in a similar way when I stayed at a 'posh' hotel and she came for dinner and we enjoyed desert afterwards in my room. Brilliant.
Until the ending. Very nice. I almost missed it as I was about to throw my hands up in disgust.
With the last ... real name of ...Knight..... I was intrigued to find the story name...
As I read ..I found my self thinking ...Yes .. i can understand ... that... I would have... and I remember.... those ...long kept ...memories..... Ah.. Yes...At 72 ..I am ...So
Very Fortunate to have .... So Many ...Sweet Ones.... of those who ......Ran, Danced
and Walked in to my life !!! So ... I thank you for a very enjoyable read...
Once a Knight ...is never ... enough....!!!
I figured out it was her husband the moment you said her husband knew about her chats and then I just wanted it to hurry up and end since the suspense was over. Not super subtle. A more erotic but less interesting version of You've Got Mail.
I THOUGHT THEY WERE CHEATING SO i DID NOT READ THE LAST PART SO DID NOT KNOW THEY WERE ROLE PLAYING. SORRY!
Nicely enough done, but the twist was something one could figure out fairly early -- probably because of the combo of Knight identifying with being in the husband's position and the insistence by both about how much they loved their spouse.
It's a well worn plot, but done very well. I got suspicious at the end of page one and then let it ride to the end. The only thing I can't quite reconcile is the large amount of time they spent together on email and the chat room. If he had that much time available why didn't he just spend it a home with her? Still worth a 5*
Good one, no, great one. You got me! Here I was trying to thing how this was Romance and not LW, and all was revealed. 5.0*
You fooled me too, as I was about to scream for a "burn the bitch" and "burn the bastard" resolution because you really made her seem slutty and him...beyond redemption after that dinner. I'm greatly relieved and for the HUGE misdirection like that...5.
Ironic and strange.
A married couple has to find creative ways to not fall into complacent humdrum disintegration due to modern stressor and keeping up with social expectations. Novel but imaginatively kinki.
WHat a way to sneak out and have a wild night, have to try that....LOL.... Good job with this little story!!!
nice story BUT have you ever heard of paragraphs? VERY hard to follow when you ran on and on and on and on
Nice story . I figured out what was going on early in the story. What a great unique way to keep your marriage
alive together.