by jennagurl2007
Take a little more time doing a better job of proof reading your material. There are spots where you've use "i" when it should have been "I" these aren't seen by a spell checker.
I would love to see where this goes with uncle Kevin. Did he rent the basement apartment.....Did he and Jenna have sex again,,,,,,,Did dad catch them and hoin in?
This has to be the best uncle and niece story I have read so far on Literotica.com. Would like more chapters!
I liked the content of your story. Very exciting. If I may make a suggestion I would like to read how you would describe yourself. other than that loved the story. Keep writing.