All Comments on 'A NOT so Welcomed Guest Ch. 07'

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TSreaderTSreaderabout 2 years ago

Nice to see this story continue. Thank you!

ju8streadingju8streadingabout 2 years ago

you are one hell of a good writer.

i thank you for stories and look forward for more

cindyp1976cindyp1976about 2 years ago

I love these 3 stories and can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

i like the series,,,very on the edge of your seat kind of story. but can you please finish it, dont leave us hanging like that

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Huh.. again.. If he's job is to spread his seed and he's got charched by having sex with women - why he just keep NOT doing it? This is kinda stupid. Same with his wifes. They blessed him with super-high stamina and thold him not to ignore their needs. Not a single word about it, a chaste kiss and thats all. What about the time of birth of his children? Overslept? So an headless chicken is running arround thru timelines, godlike powers but can't find 5-10 women to recharge his powers and leaving some happy womens behind (bcs all their men mostly dying in war).

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...