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All Comments on 'A Notch in My Belt Ch. 01'

by chaseonswrd

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Pick a fucking tense

And stay with it. I got dizzy with all the flipping back and forth.

And not even that interesting on top of everything else.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Totak fucking rubbish

Put it in the bin and don't write any more

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