All Comments on 'A Pack Of His Own (Ch. 05)'
by CorruptingPower
- 25 Comments
Ravey194 months agoSilver bullet, sense of being followed, grisly murder, another woman. What is going on? Another fascinating post but soooooooo short. 5⛤
rockingtilidrop4 months agoVery good chapter , you have so many irons in the fire , try not to burn yourself out .
Richard19404 months agoI reckon it's the nutjob from the church trying to save his congregation from the devil, for his own personal use, of course. Well and thank you, antway.5*
shadracht4 months agoLove the world, love the writing, but the chapter length, and how much time is between them, makes it very difficult to get into the flow and feeling of the story. 5* nonetheless.
LitCrit3 months agoOK, it's REALLY time to let the werewolf out of the box and into the pack. And shouldn't he be getting antsy about every 29.5 days or so? How hard are you messing with the Legend of the Wolfman? Next installment quickly, please. Yeah, 5 stars again, so predictable, what can I say - you're just that good!
Anonymous3 months agoThis sure is a great story, lots of fun. I get a kick out of the unseen shadowy characters trying anti-vampire moves against him, with no effect at all. But you'd think he'd recognize those attacks at some point...
ncpete3 months agoEnjoying the story, Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing it with us.
James_Duncan3 months agoPersonally I think this is the best of your stories, a really good balance..
Anonymous3 months agoGlad to see this series is continuing.
Really interested to find where it's going.
Anonymousabout 2 months agogreat stor, and well written. It seems to be supposed for an slow buildup with Will not knowing anything about bis heritage. Oh well, let me guess: silver bullets, toxic flower bucket as an cross, hightened senses, better smell and fine hearing... Santa Clause perhaps? Ah, no. Ok, so i would encourage the writer to try to descipher the sexscenes a little bit more graphic in terms of feelings. And how the story goes, it could be interesting to understand the oposite group what knownledge and belives they are thriving on. So far great story and only a shame it is not "more" progressed... I personally think every good unfinished story is an missed point, but of cause every storyteller is only human too, with enough other things to do (as to see in the bio, there are other storys progressed to, too). Sorry for my bad language, as it will be obviously that it is not my language. Thanks for publishing this story so far and i would love to see an full-blown, finished story in the end.
Covert43about 1 month agoI swear to god if your one of those Authors that make great stories and never finish em, imma chuck a hissy…5 star
Purplefizzabout 1 month agoI like the story, but the gradual drip feeding of jeopardy from potential W/Wolf hunters or other packs is becoming frustrating, Will would have to be very very dim indeed to not put together the connections between silver bullets, garlic, wolfsbane, his own gf calling him an alpha and his biting/marking of aforesaid GF’s neck. What next? Feeling antsy at the full moon?
I realise you probably have a pre-planned arc for this story, but please give your characters a bit more credit for joining the dots and give us sufficient that we don’t become disenchanted with the story that both you and we have invested in. Thanks, Ppfzz.5⭐️
SatyrDick26 days ago[14.04.24]
Excellente series so far...
And I looove the Brazil mention:
"You've never had your eyes opened until you've truly gotten down and dirty with Terry Gilliam's Brazil. Ever seen it?"
"Can't say that I have, sir."
"Gilliam wanted to release the film as 19841/2 but a filmed version of Orwell's 1984 was released around the same time, so he had to settle for a different name instead. Brilliant movie. Absolutely batshit crazy, but most of Gilliam's best stuff is like that."
11/10 Dead Parrots!!!!!
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