All Comments on 'A Paladin's Journey Ch. 04'

As always, a good chapter and a good deal of plot lines on the story. Glad to see that you're back at the desk, clacking away. Keep it up!

Really liked the story! I was a little disappointed about the lack of amorous activity and detail, but overall still really good :)

the scenes are fantastic, whether sex filled, or just action... it is like life you take what you can get and watch what happens around you. then as you see a need for action you either react or stay one step ahead of the game. cant wait for the next chapters. read the Paladin Training and the 4 chapters here in 2 days and excited to see what else you create.... I only wish the chapters were longer than 3 to 4 pages... it just starts to get good and then your at the end.... thanks for a great read

I loooooooovw this story line and needed this chapter so bad!! Don’t be gone for so long next time!

The addition of the new terms doesn’t add anything to the overall story and (in my opinion) actually detracts from the story. Those new terms would have made a lot more sense if used from the beginning. Other than that, this is a fantastic story.

5 stars as always, but I do have one criticism. In my opinion, the new language and terms you have added don't bring anything to the story. If anything, they just confuse an already far reaching plot, to no benefit. Great story.