All Comments on 'A Paladin's War Ch. 10'

updates are spaced too far apart that i've forgotten who sara is. hell, i've forgotten that the MCs name is aran.

and because each update is also wordy, it takes some time to do a quick read through past chapters, just so i can remember your story again. frankly can't devote that much time to do that.

finally, if that is happening to me, who else is it happening to?

please reconsider spacing updates a bit faster, and maybe reducing your words per chapter.

Loved it as always!!! Top story on Lit

Awesome chapter! If only there were a way to award more than 5 stars...

Good story as always my man, this anthology series is one of the better reads on Literotica.

Please keep it going and take your time with it.

I hope we don't have to wait 4 months for the next update! Awesome stuff. Now you've got to have Palavus explain how he lost his vala.

Take your time to keep the quality. Your chapters aren't too "wordy". I am reading this story, multiple other chapter stories on this site and others, as well as reading through purchased novels. I can still keep track of the characters.

I have really enjoyed these the stories. Can't wait to see more to come.

this is a very long series.

because of your very long break between updates, i've totally forgotten your story.

and i really don't want to devote time and waste it by spending days of reading just to reacquaint myself with the whole series, again.

yes, i've done it before. this is just too much; so goodbye.

I’ve come late to his party, yet I’m surely invested. I’ve read both Training and Journey and resisted commenting for some odd reason, not my usual approach. Your writing and story telling has consistently improved, your imagination is wonderful, what an amazing tour de force you have given us, thank you for sharing your amazing talent.