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Click here"Don't stop. Green means go!"
Maria turned and crawled up to the middle of her bed motioning me to join her. This was not necessary because I already had my pants off and was removing my boxers as she wagged her finger at me. She reached for my cock as I maneuvered my body in between her legs.
"Look, I didn't get to see any of this last time. The massage was incredible, I never had my pussy licked in all of my life and that almost stopped my heart, but for right now I want to watch as this thing slowly slides into me."
Her thong was moved to the side and our bodies joined together at the most intimate way they could.
"Just so you know? We can never go back to being neighbors or friends. I want you in my bed every night." I said to her.
Her response was to wrap her legs tight around me and pull me down by hair for a kiss as she swung her green bra in circles above us with her other hand laughing.
The End.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoI first read this story several years ago; liked it then, like it now.
The premise of a single man becoming infatuated with a neighbor wife married to an unappreciative jerk while otherwise never finding an available woman who appealed to him isn't farfetched at all--in my youth I was one such person. I undertook a similar "pampering" campaign which succeeded in initiating an affair but failed in detaching the wife from her abusive husband before he accidentally killed himself and her in a drunk-driving accident. Living with the guilt of my seduction of her and the angst of not having been able to get her separated soon enough to avoid her death left me with one of those "lifelong questions" one never wants to have--i.e. "Was it worth it?"
Conditioned societal disapproval of our actions cannot erase the sweetness of our love affair. It was and still is one of the most influential events of my life. Would we have lasted? Who knows. But her tragic death (which it was, for she had no control over HIS actions) taught me to--in simplistic trite terms--"seize the day". My wife of nearly 40 years understands why I treasure what we have and appreciates my gratitude to her for the life we have shared.
This was a good story, crafted with skill and creativity. That the "masseuse"-"masseur" mislabeling is the ONLY quibble to be mentioned in a FICTIONAL FANTASY which otherwise succeeds in its goal of erotically entertaining is, well, a clear indication that a reader has somehow lost track of what THIS category in THIS website is all about.
Thanks again LiamChristopher for sharing your creativity with us. Please keep doing so.
MLJ
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoAll the LW stories written by this author are of such a pathy level .. I wonder if he is on some weeds when he writes! His bio says he develops his characters… sadly could not find a single story where he has taken time to do so! Most of his characters are cartoonish! No touch with anything real! In most of his stories the moot point is never resolved…
1. Julie fucking Mark in Its what daddy wants..
2. Julie giving a blowjob to a customer in physical therapy ..
3. The MILs atrocious behaviour in Physical Therapy and then her sudden turn around at the end…
Nothing this author writes makes any sense… seriously I find him to be a little delinquent as a writer!!!
Anonymousover 3 years ago...öt csillagot ,de ez számomra az volt ,gratulálok,nagyon jól megírt,részletes történet ,bár ez inkább egy romantikusnak hatott,de semmit nem von le az értékéből !Sok sikert továbbra is...!
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI know that we are dealing with fantasies, but fantasies have to have at least some bit of realism, and there was none here. Even the seduction --- why would Maria have had unprotected sex with a masseuse she could not even see.
I give it a thumbs-down for lack of imagination and realism.
Anonymousover 5 years agoA nit pit, but Chad's alleged VIN swap to sell stolen cars is not plausible today. First the VIN is located on more places on the vehicle than "the official" VIN plate inside the windshield. Second, anyone buying an expensive car should use CarFax and the changed VIN would show mileage, some services, and any damage to the OLD donor vehicle.
Interesting tale, and your latest story is good. But this one doesn't work
Anonymousover 5 years agoOne day she will have to decide if she can trust him, and that might be a problem for her.
Thanks for the effort.
26thNCover 5 years agoI liked your other stories better, but this one is still pretty decent. Glad you are writing again.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoThis is a well written romantic story with a little bit of sex. Sure, it's not perfect.
The premise is very realistic. There is no shortage of men who don't value their women and don't treat them right. I have often looked at those situations and thought "I'd love to have the opportunity to treat you like you should be treated and I'll bet I'd be richly rewarded".
Anonymousover 6 years agoThe guy is a new writer, why not encourage him with constructive criticism? I've read stories, by some of the bigger names on this site, that are not as good as this story. The living wives category seems to draw out a lot of smug and self satisfied trolls who really add nothing to any discussion.
Anonymousover 6 years agoFor me -- what was there not to like. An interesting theme well told and written. Enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
bullet375over 6 years agoWhenever I see the word "masseuse" misused, it annoys the crap out of me. A masseuse is a WOMAN who gives massages. If a man gives massages, he is a"MASSEUR!"
You might not think that's important, but if you want to be a writer, you should understand the language you intend to write in.
Anonymousover 6 years agoWhat the fuck are you moaning about now? The problem lies with the reader? In your fucking dream. The problem lies with the writer. LSD said it clearly enough. Loving wives has quality writers, but unfortunately they don't post often enough. That's the problem. The shit that gets posted lately isn't worth the effort to read it.
LordSlamdawggover 6 years agoI thought the author had a fairly solid concept in having a veritable " prince " of a narrator rescue a princess in distress who is beset and besieged by her troll of a husband. Basically a modern day fairy tale could have played out.
Liam Christopher had the foundation for an excellent villain but never gave him vivid scenes to strut his evil stuff. A professional writer would have let the bad boy spin his Web of drug running, stolen auto parts along with spousal abuse and put the reader right there instead of 2nd hand accounts of his dastardly deeds.
Likewise the princess in distress role was undercharged. Put the reader in her head as husband threatens and gaslights her only to be tripped up by long arm of law and then detail her wonder and fear as mystery admirer begins his campaign for her favors. It's not good to break marriage vows BUT if you give audience good reason - they'll make the leap and sympathize in tandem with author's intentions.
This story had potential and author showed imagination in story concept and a few isolated scenes. Kudos for being brave enough to submit initial story to tender mercies of Loving Wife demographic. That being said : 1) get an editor , 2) take a course or buy book of short story construction technique along with fairy tale collection so you can update next classic for new millennium.
Bottom line : Liam Christopher flashed some promise, but his gifts need refining. I selfishly wish him good luck and Godspeed in that arduous process because good stories and proficent authors are in short supply, as of late, in Loving Wives.
