All Comments on 'A Party Gone Wrong Ch. 01'

by TheDeviantPrincess

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Spaniard2017Spaniard2017over 5 years ago
OK but we need more

A bit obvious as a reveal but enjoyable. I hope we’ll hear more of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing...

...she didn't recognise her brother's voice and he didn't recognise hers!

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
Good story but expectef

Not much ADVENTURE

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Part 2

Part 2 please

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