All Comments on 'A Penny for a Buck'

One of the greatest stories that I have read on this site! Not only is it a great story, it is well structured with correct grammar!

It would also be just as great if it was your 10th effort. It would appear that you have a natural talent to write great stories. Everything needed to tell the story was present and utilized to the fullest. Keep writing. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I enjoyed this immensely, absolutely charming and fun. I loved the wit of the characters and the shoot straight from the hip dialog. Keep up the good work and keep having fun. Don't ever force a story out just close your eyes and feel it, granted you probably should open your eyes every once in a while to write.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Sweet and erotic, keep up the very good work - please...;)

This is one of the most intriging stoies I have read in quite some time. Please keep the storie line going. Thanks for the excelent work. Lineboss89

Great story hope to see more of your work!!!

A well rounded and well thought out story with a swift and neat conclusion. Will be looking for more submissions.

Seldom have I come across as well written a piece by a new author. This individual will be a star rising, Not just in Literotica, But in any form of writing they may choose in the future. Keep writing you have the talent!

Wooohooo - finally found an author who can write with a terrific sense of humor as well as a healthy raunchy attitude! Looking forward to a lot more of your work.

Encore...

If this is your first, I'm gonna be an addicted reader of any future stories you write. I loved your wit, your charming structure of sentences, and your erotic story line. I'm hooked.

but not the first story... okay, 'fess up ... where are the ones before this one?

The story is good, the sex is good, but the transition still needs some work: way too abrupt. With an extra paragraph or two thrown in at that point this would be a very good story indeed. Keep up the good work!

For any number 1 or 111, it was damn good - keep up the great work. I now have a new author to follow.

I have rarely come across writing on this website that is both well written and appropriately raunchy. Keep up the good work.

Especially for a first story. Very well written. Flowed well ans sexy. Penny sounds kinda small but great.

Hope you continue to write here. You could even add to this story, I think! A painter and an engineer.

All in all....I like your style!