All Comments on 'A Penny for Your Thoughts'

by Many Feathers

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gdk38gdk38over 13 years ago
yes

your concept is very good, you have a good imagination and much talent in telling a tale. please pursue this story and continue the great work, i look forward to the next installment, galen

hushpuphushpupover 13 years ago
Another Great Start

Keep the good stories coming!!!! You Are One Great Writer of Erotic stories just makes you want to keep reading.Thanks

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
I think this story is going to be some of the author's better work.

The reason for that is; that there is a very solid story here,with great writing along with the author's ability to be a excellent story teller.

I so hope that you continue with this very good story, thanks

txparraintxparrainover 13 years ago
Love it

I love the story and I agree this could be Your best story yet.

C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Great Story

Cant wait to see what is Added to Brian after being struck a second time maybe it will be easier for him to Read Minds and not "lose" the ability.

it will also be nice to see if his Lady Friends come and see him to Stay and "help" him to Recover.

LuckyBastard13LuckyBastard13over 13 years ago
Absolutely One Of The Best!

What a wonderful surprise. Great story, well written with smooth build ups to the sex scenes. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thanks for sharing.

Looking forward to the next installment, if there is one.

Thanks again.

j1969j1969over 13 years ago
Good!

Consistent storyline, good characterization, keep up the good work!

desirelitdesirelitover 13 years ago
Fantastic

Great writing and character development. The sexual build up was intense. I can't wait for more.

curiousirishcuriousirishover 13 years ago
Loved it...

I can't wait to read more. :)

LittleprickLittleprickabout 13 years ago
good one

I enjoyed reading it. I'm going to read part two.

ddswolf2ddswolf2almost 13 years ago
One of your best

You really SHOULD MAKE THIS A NOVEL.

samuelmichaelssamuelmichaelsover 12 years ago
Very enjoyable

Very enjoyable kind of an MC story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The dude is smooth...

Doesn't even need any extra help ;)

risingthunderboltrisingthunderboltover 11 years ago
Male Aphrodite

That guy had lot of fun..wish i had that kind of "spark" thing

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome, sheer awesome

towards the end i nearly creamed myself without even unzipping, this story was excellently written and has alot of potential, keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
LIGHTNING

Fantastic. Really enjoyed that.

taco1085taco1085over 7 years ago
Wow

Where is the follow up chapters. Great read love your writing

taco1085taco1085over 7 years ago
Dah

I forgot there are more chapters yeah.

KinkynfitKinkynfitalmost 3 years ago

Awesome story! You should write more mind control stories.

Goodtimechuck96Goodtimechuck96about 1 year ago

Great story, so far. Good development.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

An interesting story. I have enjoyed the premise and am looking forward to more....

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOG3 months ago

Writing style...nearly cost a star...yet, I give you Five Stars(πŸŒ πŸŒ πŸŒ πŸŒ πŸŒ πŸŒ‹πŸŒ‹πŸŒ‹πŸŒ‹πŸŒ‹πŸ’―) because the whole premise works so well.

I especially like the mutual masturbation idea; we all have things we like, AND I LIKE THIS!! The whole emotional attachments behind this kind of sharing, the TRUST!! So Nice.

Now, let us see how his second encounter with ⚑ lightning affects his life!!

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