by EdDivers
Wife is gonna love it when I read it to her tomorrow night during our "nesting" session.
Lack of profanity and giant body parts was refreshing.
It's too late at night or to early in the morning to say that this is a great story. It's a highly implausible story, but it's a love story of the year. This would have been white with white or black with black and still be a fantastic love story. The location, the setting, the timing, the seduction, the stairs, the bedroom, the shower, the sketching were all wonderfully done. The ending was befitting a classic romance. The boy/man/artist/stud taking his first love home to his parents and his mother's birthday party. Fantastic!.