All Comments on 'A Perfectly Pleasing Fit'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very nice!

Wife is gonna love it when I read it to her tomorrow night during our "nesting" session.

Lack of profanity and giant body parts was refreshing.

mitchawamitchawaabout 8 years ago
WOW!

It's too late at night or to early in the morning to say that this is a great story. It's a highly implausible story, but it's a love story of the year. This would have been white with white or black with black and still be a fantastic love story. The location, the setting, the timing, the seduction, the stairs, the bedroom, the shower, the sketching were all wonderfully done. The ending was befitting a classic romance. The boy/man/artist/stud taking his first love home to his parents and his mother's birthday party. Fantastic!.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Absolutely...

Perfect!

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome story.

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