All Comments on 'A Picnic from Heaven and Hell'

Please write a part 2

Sexy and funny! I love the way you write!

Like was said, sexy and funny. Life will be different. More please!

Talk about making the best of a bad situation!!! Well done.

A really enjoyable story, like everybody else that commented I would love to read what happens next. 5 stars from me

Another well crafted submiaaion. Many thanks for providing so many great reads.

I'm so glad you're back. Please keep them coming.

Liked your story the way you presented it to us readers. Great job constructing the plot and of course the description of the sex. Nicely done, gave the story a 5 which is rare for me. Keep them coming, like the mom son approach. Like it even better if son takes over and tells Mom what to do and when. Keep the stories coming.

This is really well written. Hats off.

Brilliant though could have ended with a tender fuck