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I don't mean made me hard. I mean there was so much dialogue that it was impossible to follow. I couldn't tell who was talking most of the time. Disappointing a one because I couldn't give it less.

I tried to read this and find the positives, but lost the will to live after the first few paragraphs; your work is unrelentingly tedious and uninvolving, so really, why do you keep coming back? Are you some kind of masochist, do you get-off on posting these lackluster trudges through your sub-par imagination? Please, find another hobby, you're just taking up space here.

If you find this writer's work to not be your cup of tea, then go read someone else's. I have no problems following his dialogue, and have throughly enjoyed this series of stories and the prior one about this brother and sister. They have a light touch on how these feelings and sexual matters could be explored in an environment that would not normally allow this.