All Comments on 'A Picture With Sister'

Hot because it was the girls idea, but not full of the guy constantly saying this is wrong.

HOT HOT HOT. And a great ending.

Looking forward to chapter II.

A New Fan

AWESOME

Now the fun begins!

Love where this is going

Aqesome story wonderibgif we are getting more parts to this

I like this story. The moral boundary was kind of an afterthought but no one was childishly hesitant. 4/5

Not bad. You can write sentences and make sense most of the time, which is head and shoulders above most of the wannabes posting on this site.

My challenge to you, if you so choose, is to write a story. By that, I mean something that goes someplace other than sex. Let us connect with the characters and their life. Take us on a trip. Let us smell the roses. Get us to wonder what's happening next. Make us feel something besides horny, because then the horny is so much better.

YES!!!!!!! Part 2?

That was a heck of a plot line. Give use more, Don’t leave us hard and hanging please.

Excellent start, a little short, so..., more?

Aside from a number of continuity errors and a few minor Grammer mistakes, great story and looking forward to part 2...

Needs more chapters asap. This was great I can't wait to read your next one.

A good start. I look forward to seeing more.

Nice!!!.....more please.

A girl named Noah? Just... too weird. Reads like a gay bro on bro story.

Whoa! Sounds like a set up for another chapter. Really moving fast, but interesting.

Like the song says , you don’t know what you’ve got until it’s gone.

So now it’s make up for lost time.

MORE!!!!!!!!! Please

GOOD STORY WITH A STUPID END

Very well written!!! Would be nice if some of these stories were based in Rhode Island 😉 incest is very legit and consistent (16) no upper age limit. It would be a lot more fun and just as nice to see a love story in a place where people can be people.

2 stars because of the end. Could have been 5 BUT the appearance of another sister fucked it up!!

Oh, good, and MORE PLEASE!

A cute story that ended way too soon since another sister made an appearance. You need to get a really good editor as you have dozens of spelling errors, misused pronouns and other errors. Keep writing, get an editor and you’ll do well.

Very cute, HOTTTTT and fun story! VERY touching as well. I actually had tears in my eyes when he asked her about why she slept in his room after he left - her response - "because it was yours..." made me well up for a minute. She was in love with him even then. SOOOO sweet!

MORE PLEASE!!! This has tons of potential!

er... "the dark happy trail that descended from her navel to the waistband"?

Between that and the male name, I wonder does "she" have a moustache, too?

So will there be a part 2? Please? ;)

Where's part 2?