All Comments on 'A Piece of Heaven Ch. 01'

This story will not be for everyone. It's too well written. The style is very literate but it isn't pretentious. It's completely in the moment, yet it isn't self-conscious. It's extremely erotic, and at times very graphic, but somehow it manages to be erotic without being either pornographic or arty.

Erlikkhan writes a great dirty story, I've read several. But this is beautiful. I used to think I was pretty good at writing, but I may be out of my league here.

Shit, that was exciting. Great story. Heading to chapter 2.

Good hot story, thanks! 5 BIG FAT STARS!