All Comments on 'A Pirate's love'

The grammar needs some work but it was good. Keep up the good work

Short and sweet, good job!

It's possible to do a one-shot story without rushing. Everything happened so fast I couldn't get into the story. You also skipped so much detail, I had no idea what the character says looked like.

Honestly my only critique is that I wanted to read more of it. I loved the premise, the character development, and the intimacy; I only wish it had been longer. Have you considered updating the story in small installments, like chapters?

I enjoyed reading your story but agree it did feel rushed. I would've loved more detail.

I liked this and hope there will be more to come.