All Comments on 'A Place Beyond The Horizon Ch. 02'

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RanDog025RanDog025about 1 year ago

Enjoying the hell out of this story, thank you! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING STARS!

JustloosenmrJustloosenmrabout 1 year ago

Took you're time releasing part 2.

Good so far, still waiting for a plot but looking forward to where the story is headed.

Love the Australian story line and characters.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

A good story but I'm not reading anymore as the lack of editing drives me nuts.

Past, present and future tenses.

AardieAardie12 months ago

Why the cheating wife tag when all the sex was by a cheating husband. Looking forward to seeing whether his wife files for abandonment.

Finally, the wager was for a hall pass which means no penalties. This makes him a welcher.

DickSnugfitDickSnugfit12 months ago

Ok, so far so good! Now it's begining to motor! NOW we're cooking with gas!

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A Place Beyond The Horizon builds to a climax over the next four chapters as they land in Tokyo. If you want a sneak peak of new chapters, I'm publishing on Wattpad first: https://www.wattpad.com/story/334707193-a-place-beyond-the-horizon It was suggested that I try posting o...