All Comments on 'A Place to Belong Ch. 02'

This is really good! Maybe a prologue to introduce Marti a bit more indepth. Clean up some spelling and grammar. I'd like to get a deeper sense of the smells and tastes that are elicited. Can't wait to read the rest. And I think you should find a copywriter and look for an agent. I totally see this story as a "DoubleDay Romance of the month".

Wonderful story. Very sweet and very well written. Great job.

Again a great story! It's great to once again read some more of your work, I've missed it :) Welcome back!