by Adena
What a sick fantasy story. What are you....a fat slut that can only dream about sex?
I'm sorry - you are wasting my time AND your own. My advice to you is: by all means live out your fantasies, but please, please, please do NOT write them down for others to read.
Don't listen to them.Its your fantasy,i thought it was simple and straight to the point with no bullshit.Keep it up and send me your next submission.
I thought most of the stories in Literotica were the author's fantasy - very few, I think, would be factual. Thus, I cannot see what your other commenters are complaining about. I think you did well in telling a quick tale which could lead to more detailed and more significant stories.
Forget those idiots who gave bad reviews. This short story was good and leaves the door open for further exploits. I for one would like to see where future installments of this story go.