All Comments on 'A President's Daughter'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good, but..

The story is good, but it sounded a bit fanciful - it looks more like a fantastic dream, than a recollection. But, no probs!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Good

Sweet, excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Buildup

The actual sex scene wasn't as hot as I'd hoped for. But still, there was a certain sweetness I respect. Solid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
pls end the story !

Started off with a bet, ended in a bed , and left the reader guessing much about .. (?) what is going to happen next.

Also, did not handle / depict the actual fireworks !

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