All Comments on 'A Price Worth Paying'

I did enjoy the story. Yes it had some dark parts, but it was well written. The concept was very well executed. Thank you for sharing it.

Nice to see another long form story from you. 5 stars. This felt like you subverting some elements from your other stories, such as setting up a harem, and then dismantling it before it even got started. A character named Mark that's not the protagonist. Don't worry about it being too dark. I'd say the readers and your followers are mature enough.

With the way you handled the subject matters (both abuse/violence and romance/sex) it would not be hard to imagine this as the basis for a a best selling book or film. (You might have to change sis to neighbour )

Loved it!

Thank you

Great story.Shows real family love and what a man will do to protect it.

Great story, loved it.

A beautiful love story

Thankyou

Five stars. Great plot and handled well. Found a few typos like bar instead of back. I see these things and point them out. I hope you continue this saga. I want to know more about their life going forward.

Please keep on writing these

I'll be honest with you... it was Okay.

I fully support the MC's actions. I see where he's coming from, and can't blame him in any way. But you went so over the top with his thought process to justify those actions, it turned into something else. There is a fine line between doing the right thing for the right reasons, and being a self-righteous asshole who wants attention. Reading the part about the Court-Case, when your MC got called into the stand, all I understood was "Look at me! I'm so awesome! I'd do everything to protect my family and now everyone loves me for it! He did bad, so I delivered justice! PRAISE ME FOR IT!"

Again, I understand why he did it, and I wouldn't blame anyone for it. But there was no need to put on that public display other than to let other's know that HE was the one who did Lance in and play the hero. The police had Lance's DNA as proof. The guy would've gone on trial anyway as soon as MC's sister accused him and the DNA matched, and then all the other girls could've come forward. But no, it was MC who GAVE the girls the strength they needed to come forward...

He could've just as well crippled the guy silently in some back alley, get the names of all the spectators, and continued on with them. And while he did that, the police could've done their work and Lance's reputation would still be publicly destroyed. There was no reason for the MC to go to jail over this, other than to play the martyr.

Liked the story and it was well told. I would have liked more information on why the mother left her children in such an abusive relationship, but I think that would have been quite a challenge. Thanks for letting me read your story. - Vriesea

Liked the story and it was well told. I would have liked more information on why the mother left her children in such an abusive relationship, but I think that would have been quite a challenge. Thanks for letting me read your story. - Vriesea

Wondeful! If only..

Well written and sensitive to the issues. You didn't get detailed or messy, just enough so that we readers understood. Really good. Thank you.

One word...Wow!

Incredibly well-written. Easy to see what made the characters into the people they became.

I did enjoy the story as it was so well written and handled a very difficult topic with a large degree of honesty and sincerity.

I do look forward to seeing each new story from you and this will keep that feeling going.

Great story, well told.

5 stars all day long.

I think this is one of your best stories.

Well written, especially with the theme running through. Worth all 5 stars. Would have given more if I could.

I think you handled the subject matter very well, we knew what happened but not a the dirty facts. I can only imagine the trauma that all of them went through with Robert being so abusive. I hope that maybe someday you give us a conclusion.

Very well done, if not just a touch unbelievable at the beginning. Nobody is lucky enough to get that kind of vengance on someone else in real life.

Other than that, FANTASTIC! Thoroughly enjoyable.

Enjoyed the way you approached and handled the delicate situations. Really enjoyed reading this. Thank you!

Rather than butcher the legalese, you should have passed on putting it in the dialogue rather than making it totally stupid. Maybe you intended the judge to be an idiot?

Loved the story, even the way it delt with that darker things. I was surprised that Becca was still a virgin but then remembered something about him committing sodamy on her. I'm not sure such a guy wouldn't have jumped at taking her virginity and her ass, but it is fiction. All in all it was a very well written story that caused an old softy like me, a lot of emotion and satisfaction in what Mikey did. Five stars.

Very well written and a good read. Great flow and is easy to follow. One of the most plausible storylines that I've read here. You should consider filling out the story a bit and making it a novel.

No 5's in my world, but Ioved it!

Awesome story layout,, great build up of the characters and the events,,, happy that mom found someone to treat her properly,, great romance story for the brother and sister 5⭐️

Loved it... Hoping there's at least a part two!!!

Not to dark by any means. 5/5. Wish you had added one more page and finished the story though...

That was a excellent story. You did a fantastic job on every aspect of the story. 5stars

Think you did a pretty good job of treating it with kids gloves to reduce the aggravation some might have had if you hadn't. There is certainly things that occur in life that is way uglier than what was portrayed here and life has demonstrated some extraordinary ugly things by tyrants in history.

The story was good. Different, but not objectionable. Could use another round with a proofreader. I still enjoyed the story. Thanks.

Another fantastic work from your imagination. Quite the story and only made my eyes leak a couple of times. I know where Silverwater corrections facility is, a cousin of mine lives not far from it and the Parklea markets. I would enjoy some more of this story if you care to keep going with it. Love to see them succeed with this relationship and make some babies.

No greater gift than love. Great story the two of them will conquer the world together.

Great story! Well told.

Outstanding, in the most literal sense of the word! Kudos!

The odd typo didn't detract from the flow of the story at all, and I usually am quite nitpicky about that. 5*, what else.

This was a difficult story to read. But read it I did, and I'm gobsmacked. A few twists one wouldn't expect; for instance the parents of the "victim." But it was also an excellent story. Well done!

Another well written story for the collection. Well done. Need to grammar check it again. just saying :-)

Thought you handled a difficult subject with thoughtfulness and the right emotions. Great story and look forward to your next work.

Stay safe and well. D.

Hard to read from a personal perspective but well worth it. 5 Stars is not enough

Absolutely beautiful story! A true love story.

Always pleased when I see you've written another story. No exception here.

Good story.

Loved the story! Please write another chapter to this, would love to see where it goes.

Well written and enjoyable. Agree that 5 stars is not enough.

Amazing story I enjoyed it very much hope you will give it a part 2 would enjoy see what happens in there future 5\5

Not even a fan of long stories, regardless the genre. But, dude, you had me hooked from the first page. Lived it it immensely. Thematically, the best I’ve EVER read on thus site as I did believe they allowed violence. You killed it, 5*.

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An excellent story. Easy 5 stars. I'm glad you wrote the part that he had the benefit of therapy.

I'm not familiar with Australian justice system, but in USA if you have a jury trial, they can actually say "fuck the law" - it's called "Jury Nullification". I suspect most juries in US would have set him free given the details. Of course, wouldn't help with your storyline.

My only quibble with the story was about "we were friends and didn't want to ruin it with sex" trope which is incredibly dumb to me. You can ruin friendship with WANTING to have sex that's not reciprocated. You can't ruin it with having sex. Problems arise when one partner harms another, and if they are true friends that wouldn't happen.

Well, of course I enjoyed it. Who wouldn't? Hero bro defeats the forces of evil, does the time and loves the girl he did it all for.

There was a time when I thought the violence was a little heavy though I knew you were trying to make a point. That's the only negative crit.

Thanks for sharing!

Yes it needs to be a second part to see what the future brings

There future to be continued please

Well written and nicely paced. Thank you for your time and talent. DMW

I very much enjoyed this story

Great story, love it. Should be carried on. AAAAAA++++++

Another great story. Thank you.

Difficult subject to deal with. Think you managed very well.

Well written.

Many thanks for sharing with us.

Very touching. 5 stars

Wonderful!

Great story. And I definitely think you need to write a second chapter explaining what they do to live together without worrying about the brother/sister incest coming back to bite them in the ass. And it also wouldn't hurt my feelings one bit if you put in a little karma action on the bastard rapist either have him get shanked or made into some biker type's little crippled bitch.

Enjoyed this story

U are the best, greatly enjoyed it. Pls write more like it as soon as possible, as much as possible

Such an amazing story I hope you eventually make a part 2 where as long as they stay in that city they can be husband and wife forever and have children as a reward for all the bad things that have happened to him and his family like they pass a law that is only effective in the surrounding cities that protect him from trouble from public affection

I've been reading stories on this site for many years. This is without a doubt one of the best I have read here.

Congratulations, well done. If I could give it more than five stars, I would!

5/5. Not to nitpick too badly but Lance raped her and sodomized her so she could not have been a virgin.

Another outstanding story. I would also like a second chapter, complete with karma for not only the rapist but also for the rat bastard father. However, it's also good leaving it end here without a second chapter. I can add the rest of the story in my own mind.

@muskyboy: I guess you missed that he raped her anally. So the sodomy WAS rape and she was still a vaginal virgin.

About 75% of this was my life. It felt weird reading it and I was wondering how you knew about me. No sisters love nor mother’s. Not in any way. But the rest was almost spot on.

Not sure what else to say. Your a damn good writer and I hope you continue.

WOW, what a story. Emotions all over the place. Felt like i was there. Well done to you

Outstanding story, that had everything.

@muskyboy - I think he ONLY had her anally. He raped her ass, so vaginally she was still a virgin.

Alternately, they didn't consider what was done against her will to be her losing her virginity.

I'll admit, I'm a little surprised that he didn't have any "wild oats" after he got out, but I understand why the author chose that way.

I came to realize that incest is really no more taboo than polyamory or 'open marraiges'. Surprising to me however that aside the traumatic childhood and patriarchal physical abuse lend this narrative to an unusual 'white knight tale' and romantic love story.

Even eluded the 'Great Bard's' in topical plots barely alluded to in 'Hamlet'.

This was a great story. I believe it was written well enough that it could be made into an acceptable movie for public viewing. The subject matter of being raped and the over coming of the horrible biological male contributor are things that need to be discussed in public and brought out in the open. The whole incest thing is a public acceptance problem. I believe as long as all involved are adults and not mentally discerned that there should not be a problem as long as there is no stress out on the public for under birth defects or costs due to medical issues. Please keep writing and the characters in this story could be in many more adventures as well.

It's not every day you come across a story that moves you like this one did to me. For the first time in as long as I can remember, I actually felt hatred. Lance is nothing short of a pure evil monster, whose only purpose seems to be inflicting trauma and pain on weaker people and derive sick pleasure from it. I mean, it's bad enough what he did to those schoolgirls, then there's his girlfriend Rachel who had to put up with years of his unspeakable abuse, but then you find out he had depraved plans for his own damn sisters. His own parents even called him an evil man and his mother couldn't even recount what she had read when she found those plans, likely burned into her mind as something that will torment her until her death. My heart bleeds for anyone that ever has to go through this kind of experience and I can only hope that they don't suffer permanent damage and can end up living a healthy life.

I also question the justice system of our society when I find something like this. I strongly believe there needs to be some kind of exception clause in cases like Michael's, where a jury of your peers can deem your actions acceptable and thus excusing the normal punishment, if they unanimously agree that it was just or otherwise necessary to prevent harming others (in this case, his actions saved untold numbers of woman from enduring the horror of being raped). In this particular case, no one in their right mind would hold it against Michael for what he did, given the circumstances. I'm actually impressed he was able to hold back and not kill the guy - many would not have been able to show such restraint.

My only complaint is that the story ended too soon and left me wanting more. I would love to know what happens next for Michael and Rebecca. Do they live together and have a family? I hope so. They deserve happiness after enduring all that.

Also, to the guy talking about it being made into a movie, I don't think I'd be able to watch it. I already watched one film where a gentle soul is abused, raped and ends up dying from the horrific injuries inflicted on her. Even years later I cannot bring myself to watch that film again; mere thoughts of it boils my blood and fills me with intense anger and sadness at how people can be so cruel especially to good people (if you can stomach it, Jack Ketchum's The Girl Next Door is the movie I speak of, but don't say I didn't warn you).

Excellent story that could definitely have a follow up completed. The writing and speed of the story was spot on detailing believable characters along with a very difficult content. Well done and keep up the excellent writing.

Another Brilliant ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ story you have given us. But like someone else has pointed out, it needs a conclusion.

Best story I've read yet!!I'd also like to see another chapter,no heartache or heartbreak this time.

Great read and definitely one of your better stories

An absolutely beautiful story with flawless prose. There were a couple of small inconsistencies though, but since they did not detract from the story in any way I'll not be so crass as to point them out. Thank you . . . .

Definitely a 4 Star offering. Just a couple details kept it from being a 5 . If, you ever do a follow up story? Please don't fall into the overcoming tragedy trap, like so many others have done. Let them remain happy together, even if they would have to deal with the loss of Mum. Thanks for your efforts.

You write the best brother-sister stories

Stunning, just wow!

Jesus. Very intense. First the violence, then the love. Of course we want the best for them. Great story. (Concerning the beating of the rapist, it's a strong case for justifiable violence. Though he still got a pretty harsh sentence, I thought, given the circumstances. I guess that's society and the law, can't generally have folks acting as judge, jury, and executioner, I reckon. But he was able to accept it. That is a strong fucking man.)

A tough story to read but the goodness of so many of the people shone through.

Excellent story. You just need some real closure, maybe a short chapter or epilogue showing what the future has for them and make it a happy, bright one.

awesome! well written

You are an excellent writer. I almost never feel moved by incest stories, even if they are fun to read. This story move me.

Grear story! Would have been even better if Lance the rapist was himself repeatedly gang-raped in prison and then shanked.

Great story

Another story of yours that I found great. Your imagination is excellent and your stories carry a reader along. I found myself admiring the characters you created. Thanks for sharing