All Comments on 'A Private Pool Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Consent

I absolutely love the way consent was covered in this. Thank you.

Sexy. Excellent balance of investment in story and arousal. I really enjoyed it.

don87654don87654over 16 years ago
Could have been much more erotic.....

The author needs to write more with more sexual experience. There is not quite anything more erotic than skinny-dipping in a private pool, followed by one-on-one sex. A bare cock in a little used pussy makes the act even more cock-throbbing. In these fantasy stories, there is little chances of pregnancy in their reality. I have a bit of a problem with them when birth control is used.

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