All Comments on 'A Prom Story Ch. 02'

Still a good premise.

Still moves ahead too quickly.

What was the rush to get his fingers and then his tongue INTO her ass?

Needed more touching/caressing/licking outside before inserting.

Comment about blowing him in the car was just left dangling. Needed details of what she did. And how he reacted.

Five stars, but just barely.

Great story! Keep it going several more chapters!

Becca seems to be having more fun with Will than she would have had with Sean. Give Will a description -- some sexy chest hair for his chest and abs, maybe? Make him a very sexy young man!

superb !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!