All Comments on 'A Proper Send-off'

Best story I have read on here in quite a while

Love that line. And the whole story! I'll be looking through your submissions to see what I've been missing.

Beautiful story. Hot and sweet and real. More!!!!

An absolutely perfect love story! Full of heart, emotion, eroticism, lust & love. Not to mention some of the hottest sex I've read in a story yet! This is an absolute must read! 5 stars all the way!

Left Hot, wet, and breathless...

Wish I could find a sexy soldier to fuck me silly with her strap on. I love it keep writing!!!

This is a very well written story that I would love to see made into a video or film complete with the hot sex scenes including all the strap-on action. I love reading about stong, handsome, soft butch women who can pick up their pretty femme girlfriends and carry them off to bed. Also this had a very nice and sweet ending. Keep up the good work.

A lovely story. Please consider continuing or writing a sequel as the girls start their lives together.

This is exactly what I was looking for, I didn't expect I would find it, but here it is. Very well done!

Like the others have said. Well written and also well researched. I am in the military and all your references about training and the current repel of "dont ask dont tell" make the story feel so current and believable. I also hope that the reunion story is just as hot. Keep up the good work!

more please.........please do a follow up..ok..

Definitely worth it.

Sizzling hot and emotional, and extremely well written. The characters were well-rounded and believable and the banter was top-notch. I appreciate the patriotism aspect a lot as well. Very very good work. Will definitely read again sometime, and check out your other works in the meantime. Thanks for sharing!

That was truly amazing.

simply beautiful!!!

It's one of the best stories I've read in this site, really sweet and sympathetic. All characters are well worked on and the buildup is famously great.

I despise the military, but this story reminds us of the beings of flesh and blood who work there and suffer for what they think right.

outstanding story!

Great characters,great story,wonderful buildup.

Thanks

Very sweet, very romantic, and very sexy. Well-written, too. Thanks from hentaigirl9 (login doesn't work, for some reason).

I had a stiffy from the first kiss. Thanks.

I love it when an author isn't afraid to write a slow courtship, instead of diving into the sex by paragraph 2.

y only 5 stars ... most x'cellent

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

left breathless, and a bit damp lol

super story!

carrie

ps: actually very wet :)

Thanks. It is great.