All Comments on 'A Proper Send-off'

Know you no longer share here but never tire of reading this piece for umpteenth time. Simpjy one of the best. Thanks whatever/wherever.

Hopefully you’re still writing under a different non de plume. Good stuff!

Wonderful!!!

I loved the characters, their banter and developing relationship woven throughout the story.

A great love story, very erotic.

That was really good! Great story, well written with plenty of emotion.

Loved it. Look forward to more of your work.

What a great story. I would so hang out at June’s bar. Now, I gotta put a reminder on the calendar to read again on early Nov!

Nope, doesn't quite cut it does it.? The root problem is the same as most of this type of genre. In reality, doesn't matter whether you call it gay or lesbian or homosexual or queer, the relationships are all about self. The actions are about selfishness, what you want, when you want it, how you want it. The analogy would be to music, you're trying to both play melody when it's supposed to be a harmony.

Deserves more than 5 stars. Very picky with my Lit stories, but this has always been one of my favs

Wow! I am a veteran also, spent 4 yrs in the Army, but that is the most intriguing story I have ever read. It is also the way the story ended that intrigued me. It's a story that keeps on giving!! I ain't a lesbian, but I'd like to be. lol

Loved it!!!

Gods, I wish I could've given this excellent story more than 5 stars!

I think this was the third time I've read this sweet story.

Excellent… 5 stars ⭐️, I know it would have made your story longer, but those conversations in the bar could have had perhaps more details… also an inner thought process of June that would convey some hints of feeling and thoughts of Sarah would have helped connecting to her 2 nights offer…I know the story is from Sarah’s view… but you did pitch in June thoughts at time… anyway loved it… thank you

I haven't read this story in such a long time, and it's always popping back up in my reading suggestions

Oh my God, I adore the entire story, it really entices the reader in, the characters are amazing and there are quite a few LOL moments as well, which literally made me smile reading along.

I really hope you write more, as this is literally one of the best stories on this site.

I wish I could rate this more than 5 stars

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

great

Great story, really enjoyed it. Good balance and pacing.

Awesome story, I am adding it to my favs right now so I can find it easily again, and again…

Another great story. As a veteran myself, I especially appreciate it. I love it. And very well written too.

Fantastic!

I think I've read this story four times now, and every time I reach the end and go "Wait, that's it?!"

Expertly written, absolutely a fave, and while I want more, it's ended in a very lovely spot.

Agree, only second time reading but still as good.

Why the hell do I keep reading this story ... over and over?

Because it's that good.

Now that there... That was something.

What a well-written and romantic story!! So erotic!

There’s a vein of humour running through this story, that when added to the great blend of sex and storyline makes this pretty much a perfect story! 5⭐️ Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

One of my favorites! I come back often to read it!

Incredible story. Perfect balance of story and sex, which is really what I look for when on this site

Great story. Moves me every time I read it. Your best work

Ive read this story so many times and its still one of my favorites. Youve got a way with words. Thank you

Absolutely wonderful story... great character development... creative, believable, a great read. you are an excellent writer.

Friendship, sex, love, life … all different sides of the same wonderful coin.

Damn I love this story!

Brilliant story, loved it all the way through.

I was a little disappointed how quickly she reached for the strap-on, but otherwise solid 5.

Wow loved the story

One of the best story on here, loved the interaction between them and of course sex

Wow just wow, the build up in the story is amazing! The writing style and the humour are excellent & I am think many of us would agree that we'd love to be either of the two lead characters :)

For some reasons patience wil be rewarded amd its worth the wait ...... Hope they have a bright future ..... Lovely romance

crème de la crème.

Very well written and fun to read. Very hot, even if it is 4/5 talking and teasing and I usually prefer rough, no frills, kinky sex. Sarah and June really got me hooked to the end. I sure will check all your other stories

Dear ST,

This story is the sweetest, sexiest thing on Literotica. I’m hoping the only reason you haven’t posted more salacious stories like this here is because you’re making a ton of money by selling them on Amazon. Please don’t forget your faithful, starving fans back here, no matter how big your writing gets in the real world, ‘kay?

Like I've said before, every woman should at least have one fling with a woman, at least they'll know the total difference in sexual ecstasy. Lesbian Love is truly the best.

One of the very best of the very best here. PLEASE keep writing!

Well written couldn't stop reading!

Thanks WEJ

Splendid story-telling, but --- if a good fuck with another woman can turn a straight woman lesbian, could a good fuck with a man turn a lesbian straight? Sexual orientation is more complicated than having an orgasm which, after all, we're all capable of self-providing. But this is Literotica, where orgasms have magic.

That was really really good, I don’t really have words. Bravo! I loved the characters and their banter and the romance and the ending was just PERFECT!

Oh la la la

Bravo. I'm struggling for words and I'm normly a goddamn poet.

Wonderful, in a crowded field the best, takes the biscuit

That was one of the hottest and most romantic stories I've read. Bravo!

Very very well written!!! Loved reading it!!

Wow, one of the best stories I’ve read on here. Well written, loveable characters, interesting storyline...couldn’t stop reading!

Amazing

Outstanding. Well done. Thank you.

One of the best stand alone stories I’ve ever read on this site. Just all of it is wonderful writing! I’d love to get taken like June did...why can’t I have my own Sarah! Loved it!

I absolutely love how you build a story and don’t just jump to the sex. I think that you are one of my favorites. I will be reading the rest of your stories and hoping for more!

A wonderfully written story! Thank you for sharing this with us.

Loved it. Great sex and enough character development to make them believable.

this is one of d best. d story itself, how it was writen. thank u for givn us a bonus on d sex scene. hahaha. i hope ul make mor storys.

OOOOOHHHHH FUCK!!!! Can it get any better?

I really loved the story. It was romantic and the dialog was also cute and funny. Thanks!

An absolutely fantastic well written story with a lively build up to great sex scenes as well as romance and humour. Well worth 5 stars and one of my favourites.

He usually just trashes Romance stories, but quite frankly this story was a bit of a romance, too. You’d have received a 5* from him, so I’ll give you one instead. The best of all your stories.

Great story. Wondered why it never crossed June's mind that she could be Bi, or more likely that maybe it was just Sarah... all-in-all awesome read

That was one of the most wonderful love stories I've read, and the descriptions of their fucking were very enjoyable - a solid B, maybe a B+. Ha! More like an A++!

I’m a vet from the Cold War but I appreciate what the Young kids are dealing with—appreciate, not understand. I’ve never felt the hunger, the desperation of dealing with relationships in war zones. I am so disappointed with my government fir subjecting so many young people to so much pain without providing a strong support network. Politics aside, the sex is amazing, one of my favorite stories of all times. Thanks!’

I've read this so many times. Best ever

Its the second time I read it. Very good. You know your job!

This story one of the best I have read in a long while shows how to people can find love together please write more about these two so beautiful and sexy ands how June and Sarah love each other fantastic story please please write more about these two lovers.

Nice story— I’m retired military, and can vouch for the fact that it’s the exception and not the rule, though.

Is it true that when they came downstairs to the bar after their wild night together, they found that it had been robbed, the cash box and a lot of the booze gone? I just ask because after Sarah came into the bar from the street, she and June headed straight upstairs without June taking the time to lock up.

Just saying.

I loved it all, from the build up to the sex to the happy ending. I don't usually like my porn with feelings or plot but this was damn good. I'll definitely be coming back to it.

I love this story, I would love to read the next chapter in the lives of these 2 sexy, beautiful people. Sorry there is no 6 or 7 as I would have liked to give it a higher rating.

You are the best writer !! You would have to be dead not to feel the love and passion... well done ... that was great !

What a great story. Wonderful characters, powerfully written and so amazing.

Perfect

What a great story. Thank you.

I absolutely loved and enjoyed this, I had to add it to my favorites list so I can read it many more times.

Ever had a deja vu while having sex? I just loved this one, I sat and stared at it, imagining it:

"For a second Sarah was back in her bedroom in her father's house fingering herself to a picture of a large breasted pin-up girl."

I loved your characters, and their reunion made me so happy for them. Don't do a sequel, I'm happy just wanting their future to be wonderful!

...and I'm not talking about the sex. Such well-developed characters, understanding where they've come from and how much they change. Seriously - "hits and quits" "no relationship drama". Bringing Sarah to her (emotional) knees. I want _that_ kind of desire, that kind of love, lasting a long, long time.

and still amazed at how hot it is...such likable characters...and such a scorching hot 1st time

near very top of all-time faves folder

had already checked fave author but, incredibly, not fave story, till today,

and then noticed 1699 had also

I have read all your stuff... repeatedly... but this was amazing. It has an emotional depth that only a few writers here can match (and yes I will put you in careythomas' league of depth and use of language!) Great work. Please, more?

and I absolutely loved it. Please keep writing, SweetestThing!

I have tears sliding down my cheeks right now. I'm in a Subway restaurant and I don't even care! This relationship was so beautifully described. I'm bi, and I just wish I could find such a perfect love, woman or man! Thanks so much for this!

Kacey Owens

I just found your stories and I must say that this might be the best I've read on here. Can't wait to read the rest.

SweetestThing,

I really enjoyed this story, almost eager to have the courtship continue for longer before you got down to the nitty-gritty. Makes me wonder what you would do with a follow-on when they are less caught up in novelty and exploring each other's tastes and whims and quims as you suggest good Lesbians do over time. As a mature cis male I have worked to make my story of two loving women Speak Low When You Speak Love authentic. Thanks for a great read and a great lesson.

largo

My favorite piece on the whole site. I must have read it over ten times now and it fires me up just the same every time.

A perfect story for Veteran's Day. I've read this story no less than 8 times and it's still good to me on many levels. It's a classic as far as I'm concerned and worthy of many reads to come. Enjoy

I was having a rough day. I was in the bar and scrolling my phone. And then I saw your story. Totally made my day. It's really beautiful how you can have an impact on a stranger's life through your writing. 🥂

And, as for the story. I loved every part of it. Somehow I connected. Thank you. ⚘

ps. would you give me some pointers? only if you have time. ❤

So totally awesome.

Puts my humble efforts to shame.

nb: to the idiot Anon who criticized earlier in the year, words fail me, I felt personally insulted, so involved had I got with your story.

Every time I come back to the Literotica site the first place I visit is your stories. I have read and re-read this particular story probably 8 or 9 times. It is one of the sexiest yet most romantic stories I’ve ever read — and that includes ALL lesfic, not just ones from this site. Amazing story.

Don't do a sequel. The story is great as is, the only thing you could possibly do is take these two characters who were clearly at a happy place and destroy them with sagging boobs, dry vaginas, and bitchy in-laws. No one wants or needs that.

I agree with Thumper3340.

I have read this story so many times, and this has have a sequel.

This story one most FAVORITE story i never get tired of reading it.

This is the second time I have read this story and I thought it was phenomenal!!! I couldn’t agree more that a sequel would be great 👍 I personally thought 💭 that the way you were telling of the story was 👍 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

If your going to point out a grammar error in the writing, do it with some evidence. You "assume the grammar is as bad as the rest of them"? If you're not even going to read the story then you have no right to criticize the author's writing style or mistakes they might have made. And to my knowledge, most of the stories on here aren't professionally edited (with some exceptions), so a few mistakes are understandable. So if you think you know how to do it better, offer some constructive critisizm, or feel free to write your own stuff, but don't come here and make unfounded arguments against a perfectly good story.

If that's how you feel get off the website and let the people who enjoy good stories read. This author rocks with the stories. I don't know why you even took the time to comment.

This author doesn't even know the difference between reading and conceiving.

At least half of you should take an English refresher's course; and this site should have a moderator that can send stories back to the author to be corrected grammatically. I didn't read far enough to judge the grammar but I'm assuming it's as bad as all the rest. I'm surprised by the commentary, maybe none of the readers can speak proper English either?

I really do hope you write more of this story part 2 maybe even a part 3. good honest love is hard to come by even on great days.

I think I speak on behalf of everyone here who has read this story; a sequel is required.

This the second time I’ve read this excellent story. Isn’t time for about Sarah and June?

I just adore your stories, they're beautifully written, incredibly sexy, and always make me laugh out loud! Thank you for sharing them with us!

Wow. As a vet with a love for pin-up girls... fucking wow. Your character development and imagery is amazing. Can't wait to read more of your work.

one of the best sexiest reads ive had. this is one happy reader , thank you