All Comments on 'A Public Argument Ch. 04'

hahaha i'm so sorry about the second page only being a single line 🤣

I have to say, I'm usually into the stories where the two main characters end up falling for each other and pretty quickly tune out if I feel like it's gonna turn into another shallow fuck story. I didn't expect this series to keep me as drawn in as it has. The writer has done a GREAT job with this from the very beginning but admittedly, after the first chapter I wasn't sure he would choose to take this in a "love" direction so I was hesitant to get emotionally invested into the characters despite how well written everything's been since the very beginning. Color me impressed! 5/5

Wow - didn't see some of that coming and I loved that! I'd like the background on how she talked her parents into getting him out of the house... 5*

Loving it so far! Only request is please let them stay loyal to each other

Great idea.

Talk about lemons into lemonade!!!

Great ending.

The romance is so well done, it's so cute and it makes me so happy. The love they have for each other is amazing, but as someone else already said, please have them be loyal, would hate for something so good to go badly.

Love the risk-sex, it’s the biggest boost to orgasms. But Pops got to be a blind bonehead to not see the movement of side fucking.

Yeah, now it's getting really good....

If anyone is reading my incest story "The Girl Next Door", I have a similar situation going on between Jason and his sister Jessica. The only difference is that she's not a whack job like Maya. But she has hated every one of Jason's girlfriends because she is madly in love with him and jealous of the fact that they get to have the wife and kids thing with him while she can't. But she finds her own unique solution that is radically opposite to what Maya has done. Chapter Three is in the finishing stages and will be out soon.

5/5 for Maya finally declaring her love for her brother.