All Comments on 'A Punishment to Remember'

You may be weak in maths but you are also weak in English by using texting abbreviations in regular prose!

Check your spelling, punctuation, and proofread the story.

Reading this story is A Punishment to Remember!!!

Learn proper English and get a proofreader.

Horrible piece of crap. You need an editor and a grammar coach.

This storyline had a lot of potential, but the language skills used were atrocious. I enjoyed the intensity of the teacher's character. It was highly unrealistic, as most of these stories are, but it could have been pulled off. If you enjoy writing and want people to take your stories seriously, you need to learn and practice better english, and I think you should use an editor at least to start, should you continue writing.