All Comments on 'A Quickie with Kelly's Daddy'
by Mister_Shy
- 19 Comments
abelardeover 6 years agoThe sex scene is hot but the way you weave the words and told this story that is so sensual and enchanting, I LOVED it! I can feel Sophie's feelings and understand her want for John. Very well-written and very realistic. I look forward for more reads from you.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI had a desperate, unrequited thing for my best friend's dad, but I was too much a good girl. Thanks for helping me imagine what it might have been like had I been braver.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoIt was almost full of straight sensuality, the way that the story was told. I'd love to be able to read about another one of their clandestine meetings. Very very good work.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI wish there were more stories like this one in this column.
And I hope to read more about and of Sophie's experiences with John
Anonymousover 3 years agoReally wish there was a sequel to this, it pretty much jumps straight into the eroticism and keeps you hooked.
Maydaypilotover 3 years agoEverything about it. The subject, the beautiful language, the imagery, the passion, the timing, the pace and the length of this creation are simply perfect. Stunningly perfect. Exquisite.
Having finally published a story here myself, this writing is what I aspire to.
Thank you.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoexcellent writing. one tiny quibble from word nerd me (according to my dear wife) ...between he and I?? between him and me. common error, should have been pointed out in junior high...sigh
i'll be reading ALL your stories...
pantographover 1 year agoAmazing writing. Certainly one of the best authors on Lit. Never once have I been disappointed by your prose.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoI think it was beyond hot, but still a little formal to actually get me involved. I’ll read others to get accustomed to this style. 4 stars.
Bill S.
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