All Comments on 'A Quiet Day at Home'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fantasies

One of the perks of being the author is that you have the ability to write about that which interests you, your dreams and your fantasies. This is perhaps something that readers forget. This is more for us than for them. If you think something is boring, fucked up, or whatever else your tiny little brains come up with, keep it to yourselves. No one is forcing you to read these stories. Certainly not the author. Instead of leaving some half-wit comment why don't you try writing something you find more acceptable and entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really

Good story. Please don't let 1 negative comment stop you.

And I agree with fantasy comment. If you don't like what you are reading don't keep reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
nice fantasy

I loved the story. I really liked how her dreams were described how she was dreaming of the hot red head as he was pleasuring her. I would like to see a follow up story where she realizes something more than her dreams happened and suspects what really happened when she finds the papers and tests it by having him pick up the papers and pretending to be unconscious and what the circumstances might come out of the discovery

kelprimekelprimealmost 8 years ago
Loved it

I'm really turned off by trauma, but love the idea of noncon lovin that has a good ending. Like this.

Bravo!

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