All Comments on 'A Quiet Day in the Neighborhood'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I liked the story.

I liked the 2 POV"s. The huge difference between him and her narrations should be an asset. I'm not sure why, but I found myself nudged out of the mind set. Seems like it should be real but it went the other way. Weird

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