All Comments on 'A Quiet Evening at Home?'

A very good build up. I enjoyed it thoroughly.There are portions which can be improved but overall presentation is good. A little bit back ground on both characters and some previous history of their relationship as a brother and sister would have made this story much better. Incest story has to be different, justifying the act, not purely suck and fuck.Despite these little short comings it is a good story.

Goodness, babydoll, what a fabulous story. I thought it was very well done. I cannot wait for a sequel to this story. Perhaps, Sam and Jake's mother might catch them in action? It is just a thought.

You know who

This was the best brother sister story i have read. it almost made me climax just reading it. you are very talented.

Loud - hot - great - one of your best!

Lukas

This is a wonderful story! With your words, you've captured the scorching hot lust between these sexy siblings. I can't wait to read new chapters.

I just had to make mention of this line... She closed her mouth and bit her bottom lip as her body convulsed and you kept cumming over and over all over her face. It was almost as if you wrote it directly from one of my wetter... I meant better dreams... Feel free to email or im me don't mind the screen name its got a story behind it.

DrTwitchwell@aol.com

Really good writing! Well paced and not too OTT or unbelievable!

Good length too, not many stories going on 2 pages!

Keep up the good work!

i loved the story. very hot, awesome description and attention to details. written as if from experience!

i loved the story. very hot, awesome description and attention to details. written as if from experience!

Great read, nice build up as well. I like the approach of using the third person view. Keep writing!!

Like many readers, I detest the you-you stories in the 3rd. person simply because they make the dialogue boring and they don't make sense. Just think, from a logical perspective, who could possible know so much about you and your feelings? Ghosts just don't exist & the so-called para-normal is crap.

very hot story. so slow loving and sensual

What we have to read is exciting but I wish we knew more about these people.

I knew it was going to be a facial but, I kept reading anyway. Not a fan. Also, this 3rd person crap.