by pureheartA
O feel so sorry for the wimps who dream up this shit--They really must have sorry lives
I think the previous reader missed the point somewhat. It reads to me like the exression of a fantasy that a woman has used in secret many times and perhaps expanded over months and years - set out now for others to enjoy. I hope so at least.
Can't wait to see how you develop this. Hurry up with Chapter 2 please.
Dom Stu1
Incomplete. What happened to the rest of the story? Either finish it or delete it.