All Comments on 'A Rape Game'

Nice one Ashon

Wow...did Michelle ever find out?

something longer than 1 page from Ashson!??? I feel faint.

You know he must eventually,right? More, please!

I would have liked to know how Michelle would feel about it if she found out

I like to think that Michelle saw his trickery coming and outdid him. Now he had a dinner and a threesome to look forward to

Your turn.

I feel like he was wearing a top hat the whole time. Was not expecting the substitute victim. Well played.

Oh man! What a confusion! Spare us from your musings, please! PLEASE! And read a book!

It would be great if Mitchell found him while he was fucking the other girl for the second time and have her join them. But great story, it turned me on

Another masterpiece, Ashson, as always. <3 Thank you for posting. :)

The dialogue in this story is so well done and entertaining.

and well written

And great fantasy.

I don't think an erotic story has ever made me laugh and horny at the same time , congrats 😌😂😂 I love the guy in this story 😂😂

I've never laughed so hard before in my life!

Soooo funnnyy 😂😭

Is this a scrapped month python script? Either way big fan

a good story. not what I thought it would be like for sure. No will she run and get a park ranger and tell him this guy raped me, or fight him and get raped again and this time match him move for move and have a full on organum?

I really liked how fun and original it was. I only have two things to add. I wish you ripped or cut off Karen's clothes. I don't want to be able to put THOSE clothes back on. I really love the walk of shame part. I also love the idea if Karen offered to help him catch Michelle by telling him where she went and actually changed sides to help him get her. Karen ends up wearing Michelle's clothes home and Michelle has to go home naked.

Only thing that sucks is the author kinda just glossed over the creampie, would be nice if we get a sequel where both Michelle and Karen pregnant. Now if they both need to live with him for financial support the game could continue for the rest of their lives, maybe both could be overpowered and handcuffed together

One of Ashton’s very best