All Comments on 'A Red Behind the Bar'

by Madabouthair

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gnome_mangnome_manabout 5 years ago
Very Nice Story

I loved Denise and Kelly and their love.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Fun ride

What a fun ride this story was. The charm and the pettiness of small town life are captured perfectly, as was the problem of being different in an area where everybody knows everybody's business unless you're careful.

The sex was awesome too. If I lived near that bar I'd be a regular too even if only to hang out with Red - I mean Kelly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Furry people

Love natural fur on all people. Its ok to shave part of your legs if you want to show off in a skirt, but the rest is so fine. I have a beard, and it smells so good after I soak it in a wet aromatic crotch

GymTeacherYouDeserveGymTeacherYouDeserveabout 5 years ago
Another good one!

With a happy ending too. The guys can drink at home or find another bar LOL!

fishingrod48fishingrod48about 5 years ago
A Sequel?

Your writing is great and I loved the trouble you spent on defining Denise and Kelly. Have you thought of what the future may bring for them now that the Bar is closed Mondays and Tuesdays? Five Stars.

dirtyricekingdirtyricekingabout 5 years ago
Once again a beautiful love story!

It never fails to make me happy to read your stories! Hopefully Denise grows her body hair out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Thanks for your creative works.

Good Read. Like the development of the characters before the sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

What a great story.

willendorferwillendorferalmost 5 years ago
Sweet!

Beautifully written, lovable characters, sexy age difference, what's not to love here? I want, nay DEMAND, a sequel where Denis(e) and Kelly expand the bar into restaurant/antique shop that they run together, that sparks off a small economic renaissance in the little town. Then Denise's father gets early release from prison, leading to a showdown of sorts. Hell, I may have to write this myself.

AyaaChannAyaaChannalmost 3 years ago

Great story. Beautifully written. I loved it!

UncertainTUncertainT11 months ago

A very gentle and rewarding story.

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