All Comments on 'A Rendezvous'

Piece of writing, sensual and not rushed. Very nice indeed, I'd definitely read the next if you decide to write it..

Very sexy. I hope there's more coming.

I really hope there is more, if I could I would have given this at least 10 starts, please keep going

Hi everyone, thanks for commenting and rating this story! As I've said, I'm not sure if I'll be writing another part to this, but I do have some ideas for other pieces in the works right now.

I often wonder at some of the scoring on this site---in my opinion "A Rendezvous" is a well-written story and certainly worth more than the 4.50 given. I'm not usually one who calls for a sequel to what is obviously a one-off short story. However, in this case I think you might have some material to work on with Jess's strange/bad dreams (first paragraph)---what causes them and why? Just a suggestion.

Moves along briskly, very well written and definitely deserving of at least one more chapter. Perhaps some backstory on both Jess and Rose?