All Comments on 'A Ride to School'

by The_Darkness

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Well Done

Haven't read any of your other stories yet, but "A Ride to School" is one of the best written I've seen on this site (and I've been frequenting this site for several years). Keep writing.

niyah2niyah2over 19 years ago
great story

Dear Darkness Sir,

A girl has read a few of Your writings and left You comments on one. You write very well. The last story of yours that she read was a non consent. she prays You will keep sharing Your writing with all of us here. This story was great and I enjoyed it alot. Though would have liked to have seen it a little longer. grins

niyah2

Honey123Honey123over 19 years ago
HOT

This was a really hot read. I enjoyed your story alot! Can't wait to read more...

Honey

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
good but...

48DD???? on a 5', 120lb girl???? clearly a man wrote this and you know nothing about proportions.

marriedpervsmarriedpervsover 14 years ago
Loved it, very erotic

Darkness - loved it! The sex and flirting in the car was amazingly erotic and realistic...

Thanks for a great read...

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