All Comments on 'A Ritual to Corrupt Purity'

Very good story. Especially for your first, as I think you said. The details are very vivid

Great story. It was just the right length, not to rushed but not mindlessly drawn out either. You did a good job of focusing on how the characters felt and not just the mechanical motions which is something a lot of first time porn writers have trouble with. The plot was familiar but it had a couple of twists where it surprised me which kept it interesting. All and all, quite well done.

All in all quite excellent for a first erotic piece. Could use some editing all around, so if you know someone you trust to run through it for stuff to be worked on, excellent.

Great first story!

Yaaaaaaaaaay! <3

Would love to see more from this universe in other stories

Incredible story, especially for being the first.

While this story has ended at the right time and place, I would love to see more of this wonderful pair's new life, especially the kind of sex they have with each other now that love is leading them instead of corruption.