All Comments on 'A Road Trip Fantasy Pt. 04'

I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks

I think you have the makings of a pretty good read. Enjoying the story for the most part. Personally, I like a story that is more believable than not and allows the reader to better relate to the characters. Understanding the website is about erotica, I can see why every page and chapter has sex scenes. But, it almost overwhelms the story you have going here.