All Comments on 'A Roaring Craving'

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ravishmentravishmentover 3 years ago
Ooooo, this has so many possibilities.

I do believe that this could lead somewhere amazing in the hands of the right author.....are you up for it? Your history on Lit says yes....I like surprises~

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 3 years ago

Good story! It would be interesting if the son found out what his mother and friend are up to.

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chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Very Original Storyline*****

Great opening chapter. Looking forward to the continuation of the story. Thanks for sharing.

trigudistrigudisover 3 years agoAuthor
A Sequel Is on Its Way

It cries out for one and I can't resist. Loads of possibilities as a poster here said. Writers say that characters take on a life of their own, and it's true. Stay tuned.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good start

A nice entry to a storyline with potential.

Some back story would be good to provide context (ex husband, families)

Looking forward to part 2

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

Interesting... and how will she explain to her son and daughter?

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Free-lance writer who enjoys reading mostly non-fiction but also Nicholas Sparks romance novels and "serious" lit (John Updike, Irwin Shaw, Philip Roth, Herman Wouk). I enjoy writing these stories because it entertains me as well as the readership. Lit is unique in that wri...