by trigudis
I do believe that this could lead somewhere amazing in the hands of the right author.....are you up for it? Your history on Lit says yes....I like surprises~
Good story! It would be interesting if the son found out what his mother and friend are up to.
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Great opening chapter. Looking forward to the continuation of the story. Thanks for sharing.
It cries out for one and I can't resist. Loads of possibilities as a poster here said. Writers say that characters take on a life of their own, and it's true. Stay tuned.
A nice entry to a storyline with potential.
Some back story would be good to provide context (ex husband, families)
Looking forward to part 2