All Comments on 'A Roll in the Hay'

Glad to see you're back writting good quality stories.!!!!!

Great job on this one I think it could become a series....

At last a story worth reading! Many thanks

For a journo your grammar and spelling sucks. Story concept and structure are great but the flow really screws up when the reader has to translate. Spell-check is YOUR enemy. Get a proof-reader.

a strange little tale and so full of humor....what a strange couple they make and no morals at all especially when she is thinking of getting another guy to fuck her mother as dad is laid up.....definitely red necks....