All Comments on 'A Room with a View'

Wonderful experience......

Great writing Annie. Re-living the experience? Embellished truth? A fantasy? Mystery keeps the reader in erotic suspense too. Hope you write a follow-on story.

We used to enjoy the exhibitionism ... well “she” did ... especially outdoors.

We understand the eroticism.

"...schlup, schluo, schlup..." Love the sound effects.

Wow! A contest author whose vocabulary is precise and extensive--pudenda, labia, vagina--and whose story is erotic. You go, Annie!

Best window-to-window voyeurism scene since Hitchcock's "Rear Window." The third to last paragraph is quite simply the most erotic passage I have read in ages. Nice.

Awww. An experience shared. Much like my own.

I wanted it to be longer, but that means it's just like the encounter you wrote must feel to the characters. Nicely done.