All Comments on 'A Roommate, With Benefits'

by NotHemingway

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

Decent buildup. But the sex, once it happens, is over too soon, and has not nearly enough details.

Four stars.

zooliciouszooliciousover 2 years ago

Not a bad roommate story. Not a great one, either. Fun times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

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Wiz1002Wiz1002over 2 years ago

Perfect roommates, almost

It was great that they were FWB and it worked out well but I would have liked a bit more description of the sex they had and was a little disappointed that it didn’t develop into penetrative sex. Good short story

AtrampboyAtrampboyover 2 years ago

Loved it! Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

For a sex story, there is very little sex. What little sex there is, is very rushed. It would have been nicer to have their relationship develop over a longer period of time and have the sex be a bit more involved.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Somewhat hard to believe, that they'd be fingering and tugjobbing for months, and not having sex.

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I write for a living, although not fiction. I enjoy stories where the eroticism flows from the narrative, and the specifics are left to one's imagination. I am often accused of being short on descriptions of sex acts, but I'm trying to do better in that regard. All comments...