All Comments on 'A Rude Awakening'

Excellent use of detail. Unlike some other stories, one could imagine something like this happening. Good one

This story was really hot, and your picture is too. I can't wait to read and see more!

You have us wanting more. You did say that this was the start of many more experiences and you should share them with us. Thank you. Oh, very nice photo by the way and hope we get to see more

Loved the story was really good

what a story! fun experience im sure. love the pic as well

Great story. Please write more. Loved the pictures.

Great story and picture. Show us more!

Great story. We want to hear more.

Well told and exciting....very believable. Tell us more.

Fresh, honest, sexy - I liked this a lot. Thank you!