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soafsoafabout 3 years ago
Looking forward to part 2!

Fantastic first story! Great to see a new author hit one out of the park.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great story

A fantasy most guys dream about , coming across a hot naked female and fucking her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Well done. Good story overall. Glad you didn’t go full on porn star with the dialogue when the two guys were pleasuring her, seemed more realistic. Not sure the husband needed to be part of the story unless you have plans to continue that part of the story in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
5 stars!

For your first story, it was really HOT! I'd like to encourage you to keep writing. I loved your themes... Married Milf, younger studs. Multiple guys, one hottie... hot wife... hubby watching her.. The only comment would be more detail on her arousal and thoughts as she gives in to her inner slut...

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I'm just a normal guy who enjoys writing erotica in my very limited spare time. I write mostly because it turns me on thinking about people getting off on something that I have written. If you have read one of my stories and enjoyed it, leave a comment or send me a message...