All Comments on 'A Second Life'

A wonderful first effort and a thorougly enjoyable read.

Welcome and hope to see more of your works.

Mike

Some people like Fast Cars, some like Safe Cars. Some people like Fast Food, some people like a 3 Course Meal. Some people like Wall to Wall Sex with no story, some like a good story that contains sex. To each their own. This story is a good read.

I really enjoyed this story. A few suggestions, though - you could improve readability by using more frequent paragraph breaks and separating dialog into its own paragraphs to avoid the "wall of text" look. Also, a more appropriate category for this story would be Erotic Couplings or maybe Group Sex - it seems a bit too racy for Romance.

Good character development and plot line. Can't wait till I read more.

Before write my comments, I want to read all the chapters, but I need to say that, normally, I don`t agree the story's about bi relationships. Two are a couple, tree starts to be a multitude (handled with care, maybe will can work), foursome or more, will be a dangerous relationships in many cases.

No more comments from me until I read all the chapters.

Until then, I give 4 stars for now.

I got to page 4 and stopped with the reveal.

The story did not match my search criteria.

No negative comments about the authors style or talents, just not my cup of tea.

Sorry, but absolutely no. I appreciate the tags show the content, but this is listed in the romance section - not as an incestuous polyamorous relationship that started as a maybe romance. 4⭐️ because I enjoyed the part of the story prior to the incest, I wonder if Chelseas’s deceased parents would have approved of how she was being “looked after”. Creepy, he should run away fast.