All Comments on 'A Secondhand Phone'

Fantastic story. You hit this right, with the right amount of background for each.. I really enjoyed the storyline. A great 5 Star story.

PB

There is no way a mother wouldn't be able to recognise her sons voice. Ok maybe once but surely by the second time she would have known it was her son. Story also needed some editing.But i liked the idea.

Pretty good, a hot read. Bonus points for giving her a baby.

Another top storry but please do not end it there

. Have to be more chapters over a 20 year period of love and growing family between them

please do not end it there

Was this some type of attempt to tell what you wish you'd have been able to do to your father?

Incest aside, seems very close to the bone in details of angst.

I was not too bad but it was not good either like was said in some of the other comments there is no way in hell a real mother is not going to be able to tell that it is her sons voice and it does sound like what was done to the father in this story is something you would have liked to do to your father besides those things if you would have left this whole master,sire,knight,king and wench mess out the story line it could have been better cause the idea was there so was the build up but you messed it up with those words but like I said it was not bad keep writing and working at it and you'll get better

And very hot! Love it!

Don't worry about a critic or two you did a fine job.

Ok then. Good story. Just waiting for part 2, as your statement indicated. How many children did they have? How has life progressed for them?

Really like your stories (and there are a lot of them)😁.

I don't normally complain, but shit man you really need an editor for this one, if you read it again you'll see why. I'm not a grammar nazi, I don't care if a full stop is missing or a comma is in the wrong place or shit like that but when I had to read the sentence twice to realise you left a word out it's a bit much. The storyline itself was very good infact it would have been another one of your ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ stories but for the missing words and other errors ⭐️⭐️⭐️ Only, sorry this was not up to your usual standard....

He's quite correct, your story lines are good but the constant spelling and grammar errors are distracting to say the least if you had an editor your stories would be more enjoyable to read.

What is it with this guys and mommy's backdoor? Why can't they just have a normal relationship with mommy? I've been there and done that and I can tell you it's no big deal. If it was my mom I would treat her like a lady should, nothing dirty, and that is as dirty as you can get. You do that with prostitutes, not your mom. I don't even know why I respond to this stories since I never see my responses posted, And I'm not coming back tomorrow to see if it's there. I'll be moving on to another story and probably not seeing this one again.

Jamie gets 5*****+,he also gets a very hot mom........good read THANKS

ALWAYS gets a NO! from me...

What is with all the negative comments? It's a story. If you don't like the anal then turn the page. Qualitywheat, Good job like the read and the tenderness. Splashwet.

Loved the story. Huge turn on.

It's clear the Mc was just a little boy and possibly the writer saying there isn't any better words then a woman saying my king my sire my master he for damn sure wasn't a man cause a man wouldn't have let her say that shit and he wouldn't have treated her like she is a slave sure a woman can be a slut the her husband or boyfriend but she shouldn't be treated like a slave and she shouldn't act like 1 the actions and sayings in this story would have been a turn off to a man if it wasn't a turn off for someone it's cause there nothing but little boys and what they say means nothing