All Comments on 'A Secret Life Ch. 01'

What a great, but mean, lol, ending to this first part!!! Love this story and the way you've tied Simon and Greg into this. Those are 2 characters that I fell in love with and am so happy to 'see' them again too. Can't wait for the next part! Great job!

Nooooooooooo....

Dont stop.... I need more!!!!!!!!!!!! please!

Love the story - very much

Brit Girl (Berkshire)

That was probually one of the best leadins I have ever seen written on literotica, it drew me in, and kept me suspended holding my breath in anticipation for the next chapter. Very well done.

~EnchantedGreen

oh don't end it there! i hate cliffies! but you promised less build-up in this one...build up is okay, i just get so impatient. I know you like to write from both sides of the situation, but maybe for the next story try only one side, then it will be even more dramatic since we won't know the other person's feelings ahead of time!

awww. Cute. I've been enjoying working through all these series (what's the plural of that anyway? Surely it can't be "serieses!"), and this is the last one. Here's to another late night!

So I'm reading this story & I'm like wait, I've read this.

Then I realized I've now read three of your stories & it's so amazing how they all fit perfectly together. You're an amazing writer. And I'm definitely excited to read all of them.

Forget how many times I've read this, but each time I'm amazed, it's so cute and quietly sexy at the same time. And I'm very grateful I found it after you had finished the whole thing. Liked your other series as well.