All Comments on 'A Sentimental Heart Ch. 04-05'

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GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
Gentle, achy romance.

Sweet romances on an erotica site can certainly build up some tension. In an erotic coupling tale, Marcus and Miranda would have gone through the front door and down onto the couch. Under the Romantic banner, readers know we must wait, even if impatiently.

The two make an intriguing couple, so it will be worth our patience to hang in here.

And the kisses so far have been quite luscious.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago

Sweet romances on an erotica site can certainly build up some tension. In an erotic coupling tale, Marcus and Miranda would have gone through the front door and down onto the couch. Under the Romantic banner, readers know we must wait, even if impatiently.

The two make an intriguing couple, so it will be worth our patience to hang in here.

And the kisses so far have been quite luscious.

raven616raven616over 12 years ago

So glad to read new chapters, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
oh dear

*laughs*

Oh dear indeed, but now what?

Jason

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
we know so little about these people

it is difficult to become fully engaged in their turmoil.

Archangel_MArchangel_Mover 5 years ago

You failed to describe Amanda's costume. I feel slighted. XD

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Update: September 15 2014. I have just submitted chapter one of a short story that I have written. It is called A Lady's Dilemma, and it will be a romance - eventually. It is a little bit of fun that I hope you will enjoy. I am currently self publishing some of my longer stor...

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